March 2, 2017 at 10:39 am #202346
Hello all - as always I like to get some feedback on my work. I just recently revamped my personal website so if anyone has some time to give some unbiased feedback (positive or negative) it would be appreciated!
Thanks in advance!
https://whiteleydesigns.com/April 5, 2017 at 4:51 pm #204353raulfjMember
Looks geat. Maybe a bit messy. The other sites that you have designed look better. I would give more importance to your potfolio. Some are impressive.April 5, 2017 at 5:35 pm #204357April 5, 2017 at 5:52 pm #204358raulfjMember
By messy I mean that when I enter I see a "4 boxes structure". Just the picture call my attention. Then I read the titles to get an idea about what is the site about. But they just read "Welcome", "Services" and "testimonionials". So I scroll down and I find a "three columns structure". Then from the heading "Proyects" I get an idea.
I would prefer a welcome headings that says something like "Wordpress theme development". The picture looks write. Later "see my proyect", "testimonials". And "Joing my newsletter" call to action to contact. I mean something that can reduce the time to know the site proposal in two seconds.
Just an idea 😉
PS: I love your site http://carolinehayden.com/April 6, 2017 at 6:20 am #204376
Thanks for the feedback! I understand what you're saying. I think I like the one word headers better -- keeps it uniform, but I certainly understand what you mean.
Thanks for the compliments on the other sites as well!
April 8, 2017 at 10:22 am #204504ezinesParticipant
I like it!
It does feel a bit busy/cluttered though. A little more vertical whitepsace in each content area might help.April 10, 2017 at 8:25 am #204555April 16, 2017 at 1:57 pm #204851indikaParticipant
Hey Matt, I just had a quick look and my 2 cents worth is as follows:
First off, the home page loaded very fast, so well done on that front!
The site is nice, and bright and colourful and looks modern, which I like.
I noticed 2 things which I thought I'd bring to your attention as I would have done them differently:
a) The titles of the recent posts - I would have liked a smaller font. As it is, it looks heavy and clunky.
b) I would have less of the preview text for the PondHole project.
As they stand, I think they make the page look a bit cluttered. I would like to see more white space. That's just my opinion though and I am no expert (I'm not a developer or anything).
I hope my comments will be of some help. Best of luck in everything and warm regards,
IndikaApril 16, 2017 at 6:03 pm #204859
Thank you for the feedback! I do think reducing the size of the post titles is a good idea. They are <h2> tags which are that size throughout the site, but they do look a little oversized there.
Again - thank you for taking the time to take a look! I certainly appreciate it!
April 17, 2017 at 7:05 am #204875indikaParticipant
Great to hear from you! It was my pleasure!
Take care and warm regards,
IndikaMay 26, 2017 at 11:51 am #207040July 19, 2017 at 10:53 am #209297
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