[redcherry]

Hi Alan,

Thank you so much for your feedback and compliments. I've re-read my posting and I do agree that sentences could have been better by removing the prepositions at the end. The comment on the structuring the conversation was apt, I felt like I was taking a jerky car ride while I was reading my sentences, yet I couldn't really figure out the actual problem till I saw how you flowed the sentence in the example given. I'm taking this feedback for my future posts while keeping this post intact to serve as a reminder for structuring my sentences.

You were right on the part about not explaining further on the issues that I faced, I'm still trying to find a diplomatic way to vent my frustrations or issues without offending any readers, I'll never know when my bosses will chance upon those posts that I've made. The irony is that  I would still like to make the blog public so that people can enjoy reading about my life.

I would appreciate if you could still pop by my blog occassionally, to give me pointers so that I can write better, and make the reading more pleasurable for my readers.

RedCherry

[redcherry]

Hi Brad,

Thank you for the feedback on the usage of a different blog framework, as recommended I'll have a look at Genesis.

Would appreciate if you could also comment on my blog content and style of writing.

Regards,

RedCherry

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